Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Kid Lit Blog Hop--Parched, by Melanie Crowder


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Parched

Title: Parched by Melanie Crowder, 154 pages
Publisher: Harcourt Children's, 2013
Source: Library

Summary:
In an unnamed (but African-feeling) land, violence has taken over as sea levels rise and drought leaves almost no fresh water anywhere.  Told from the perspectives of Sarel, a girl whose parents have been killed for their water; Nandi, the leader of the pack of dogs who surround Sarel; and Musa, a boy with the water song inside him, the story tells how all must work together to survive in a parched land.

Review: 
Parched reads almost, but not quite, like a realistic novel.  The author's choice to keep the place unnamed has allowed for a slight exaggeration (I hope) of conditions compared to anywhere real, and leaves room for a hint of magic in the ability of the boy Musa to "hear" the water underground.  I usually prefer more realism and less magic (except in books that are clearly fantasy), but this is good.   The blend works, and the result is a powerfully moving book told in a lyric style that is beautiful even when the story is ugly.

And the story does have its ugly parts.  It opens with violence: the murder of Sarel's parents, and the burning of their home, and there are upsurges of violence throughout.  At times the beauty of the prose makes a striking contrast with the ugliness of human nature, though the stylistic writing keeps that ugliness at just enough distance not to be jarring.  I would, however, recommend this only for older middle-grade students, because of the violence.  Ultimately, however, it is less about how the world could look in a time of extreme shortages, and more about the beauty of the earth.

Probably my biggest criticism of the book is an ending that seems to imply that everything is fine, though the underlying causes of the children's troubles are unchanged, and I see nothing about their situation to protect them from the evil leaking out from the city.  This is not uncommon for children's books, of course--some kind of happy resolution is a good idea.  But sometimes to our adult eyes, it's too clearly contrived--or doomed to be short-lived.


 Full disclosure: I borrowed a copy of Parched  from the library.  I received nothing from the author or publisher for my review, which is my honest opinion.  The opinions expressed therein are my own and those of no one else.

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Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Flash Fiction--40%

As you may have already noticed, my blog schedule is a bit messed up this week.  It's going to stay that way, as I will be attending a conference this weekend (not writing; California School Boards Association, where I will contemplate education issues until my brain explodes).  So I'm writing and scheduling as well as I can for the time I'll be gone.  Anyway, I already missed Monday. 


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Last week I threw out 200 words for the newest Chuck Wendig challenge, the serial story written in five segments by five different authors.  Round Two links here.

My story, posted last Tuesday, was continued by Hana Frank AND by Connie Cockrell.  I will try to keep tracking developments on the story.  And on each that I continue.  This is going to get complicated.

This week, I picked my story for the second part, and wrote the next 200 words.  So, as of now, we have 400 words of a story.  Next week, I'll snag yet another story and write part three.

This week's story was started by The Urban Spaceman


Here's his beginning:

Joe’s Bar


“Buy me a drink,” he said, bloodshot eyes meeting mine from further down the bar, “and I’ll tell you how I broke the world.”


I gave a snort, took a long swig of my G&T, and turned my attention back to the game being shown on Joe’s decrepit TV.


“Go on,” he insisted, in a voice ravaged by years of strong alcohol. “It’ll be worth it.”

Glancing around, I looked for help, but none of the other patrons of the grotty bar were paying attention to me being pestered by the old loon, and the bartender was very focused on cleaning a glass. The old man’s eyes bored into me from beneath his dirty mop of hair, and in the dim light of Joe’s Bar I saw the dark red stains on his grey trench coat.

“Alright.” The game was dull anyway. “What’s your poison?”

“Scotch on the rocks.”


I nodded at the barkeep, and the old man watched hungrily as the amber nectar was poured.

 “Go on then,” I prompted him. “Tell me how you broke the world.”


 He took a sip of his drink, gave a happy sigh, and looked up at me with those bloodshot eyes.
  “It all started in 1939…”


And now, my continuation:

Nineteen thirty-nine?  That was an obvious place for a claim like his.  “So you were responsible for Hitler?” I guessed, humoring the old man.  He might have been alive in 1939, but he certainly wasn’t old enough at the outset of WWII to have played a significant role.  To have broken the world.

“Not exactly.”  His voice was still coarse, but now seemed somehow stronger.  “I was Hitler.”

I laughed.  “Yeah, you look it, Old Man.  Tell me another.  You were Mussolini, too, right?”

He wasn’t laughing.  “Yes.  And Stalin.  They were all aspects of me, and because of my incompetence millions suffered and died.”

I sighed, and bought him another drink.  The first one had sort of evaporated, and I wanted to hear what kind of story he’d spin.  The game really was dull as dishwater, and this lunatic at least had some imagination, unlike the coaches, who kept trying the same failed moves.

 His voice was much clearer now, the ravaging effects of the whiskey fading as he began to tell his story.

“I thought it would be for the best.  I started with Stalin, when Russia needed a strong leader.  Times really were bad, you know.”


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Note: Part Three is now available here.  But that's beyond my control :)


And now for something completely different. . . .
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Sunday, December 1, 2013

The 12 Authors of Christmas Blogfest and Giveaway!

Welcome to the fantastic 12 Authors of Christmas seasonal giveaway and blog tour!

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Our busy Book Elves are giving away a total of 30 prizes of books suitable for Middle Grade readers - age roughly 8 to 14 - although a lot of adults enjoy them too!

Who are the Authors on tour?

All these authors are interviewing each other, reviewing each others' books and more in the Giveaway blog tour starting 1st December. Click the links to go to their websites and find out more about them, and check out their books in the InLinkz list below.

Jemima Pett: the Princelings of the East series (1st, 11th and 18th December)

M G King: Fizz & Peppers at the Bottom of the World (2nd and 10th December)

Fiona Ingram: The Secret of the Sacred Scarab (3rd and 12th December)

Wendy Leighton-Porter: The Shadows from the Past series (4th and 14th December)

Stanley and Katrina (Pet Authors): The Perpetual Papers of a Pack of Pets (5th and 17th December)

Ben Zackheim: Shirley Link, ace detective series (6th and 19th December)

Rebecca Douglass: The Ninja Librarian and Return to Skunk Corners (7th and 16th December)

Cheryl Carpinello: The Young Knights of the Round Table series (8th and 13th December)

S Smith: The Seed Savers series (9th and 18th December)

Julie Grasso: Caramel Cardamom series (11th and 22nd December)

Paul R Hewlett: Lionel's Grand Adventure series (16th and 20th December)

S W Lothian: the Quest series (tba)

 

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