I keep thinking I can cover more than 2 days in a single post, but there are so many photos, and we did so much! So forgive my self-indulgence and be patient as I work my way down the river. For Zeke, I'm adding info about our camps and stops.
Day 7:
This was a day for an early start, due to the logistics of running a river whose flow is controlled by a region's power needs. Crystal Rapids is a notoriously challenging stretch, and is easier at low water. Thus we were hurried along to get to the rapids before the morning's release from the dam (to power the SW) reached that stretch of the river. We left camp at 8 a.m. and headed straight into Boucher Rapids, leaving us all cold and wet (especially those in the bow of the boat).
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| Ready to shove off after a night on a wind-blown sand dune. |
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| Emerging from a rapid, looking back to watch the other boats. |
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| Between rapids we could enjoy the scenery, which included quite a lot of desert bighorn sheep, including this band which had two lambs (only one pictured). |
Making camp before lunch allowed us to do another substantial hike, up and over a ridge into Shinumo Creek, where William Bass had a tourist camp long ago. Climbing an 800' ridge in the mid-day heat, even starting with wet clothes, was painful, but worthwhile.
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| Looking back from the divide. Camp is the little sand bar below the rapids. |
On this hike we finally started seeing some flowers, mostly cactus blossoms.
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| I think these are some kind of four o'clocks |
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| Claret cup cactus |
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| Prickly pear |
Once over the top we dropped quickly into Shinumo Creek, where cottonwoods offered some shade.
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| Outdoor mini-museum at Bass's camp |
At the turn-around point, a glorious swimming hole.
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| Enjoying the washing-machine action of the mini-falls. Creek water was cool, but not cold, so it felt great. |
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| Pro tip: if ramen noodles are on the menu, dress it up in a chef's uniform |
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| Much easier to find a corner to flop out a tarp and a single mattress than to put up a tent. In this case, just one rock away from the kitchen, so I could be first in line for the coffee. |
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| The energy and skill of our guides never ceased to amaze me. |
Day 10:
We started the day with the cinnamon cake that had refused to cook in time for dessert--all were agreed that it made a great addition to breakfast, so no complaints. This morning, I took a front seat in the dory, rapidly becoming my boat of choice.
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| The paddle raft was off limits to me due to tendonitis in my elbows, but dang, they always seemed to be having fun! |
About 10 we stopped for a 4-mile hike into Garnet Canyon. It started with a fun rock scramble, before we hiked around and into the canyon.
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| Start by ducking under the arch! |
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| Climbing through the arch and on up. It was a pleasure to do my scrambling with a guide always ready to lend a hand where needed, or just to point out where to put hands and feet. |
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| Rounding the end of the ridge to Garnet. |
Garnet proved to have a nice little slot canyon to explore, with some help up a couple of small pour-offs.
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| It was also really nice to sit there in the shade, even though the creek was dry, so there was no swimming hole after all. |
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| The pool was deep--well over our heads, and suitable for the brave to jump into. |
Several of the guides and a couple of the passengers made the climb up behind the rocks on the right to the slippery jumping-off point. They made quite a splash.
I wasn't about to jump, but I put my waterproof cell phone in a pocket and went to take photos from a different perspective.
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| From the cavern looking out. |
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| I'm thinking this should be my new author photo :D |
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| If you can't choose, do it all. That includes the menu option on burgers and brats night. |
Dang! Forgot to hit "publish" before I went camping!
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June 2 question - For how long do you shelve your first draft, before reading it and re-drafting? Is this dependent on your writing experience and the number of stories/books under your belt?
Please do answer this question in the comments! I'm interested in how others handle this curious part of the writing process. (Note: I have fled the insane heat in CA's lowland interior and probably won't read responses until Thursday night or Friday).
My own answer to the question is still evolving. Before I get to that, let's start with the writer's update.
The novel planning and plotting continues rather slowly, but I'm pleased to say that this week I have completed and shared one short story, and drafted my WEP story for the 16th. I have also finished (I think) messing with the cover for my fourth short story collection, Clues, Cops, & Corpses (revealed below, because why not!). I'm planning to launch that into the world on the 14th, but it's available for pre-orders at Amazon now!
That about sums up my progress, so how about that question?
My ability to get back to a project has improved--a LOT--as I've gained experience. Part of that is the gradual change from looking at revisions as some kind of torment to seeing them as a creative act, if more challenging than the original composition. So instead of letting an MS sit around for a year while I piled up other new work that needed to be revised, for the last several books it's been a matter of months, sometimes as little as two (that depends on the travel schedule as much as anything).
I think two months might be about the minimum to get my brain to shift from playing with the bright shiny new toy to figuring out how to make it better, if we are talking novels. For short stories, the next day will do, and fifteen minutes for flash fiction on a deadline :D
Okay--your turn! How long do you like to let a story or novel steep?
And here's that cover: