Showing posts with label love stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label love stories. Show all posts

Friday, May 24, 2019

#Fi50: Sweet Home, Alabama

Fiction in 50 is a regular feature in the last week of every month and I invite any interested composers of mini-narrative to join in!
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What is #Fi50? In the words of founder Bruce Gargoyle, "Fiction in 50: think of it as the anti-NaNoWriMo experience!" Pack a beginning, middle and end of story into 50 words or less (bonus points for hitting exactly 50 words).

The rules for participation are simple:

1. Create a piece of fictional writing in 50 words or less, ideally using the prompt as title or theme or inspiration.
That’s it!  But for those who wish to challenge themselves further, here’s an additional rule:

2. Post your piece of flash fiction on your blog or (for those poor blog-less souls) add it as a comment on the Ninja Librarian’s post for everyone to enjoy. 
And for those thrill-seekers who really like to go the extra mile (ie: perfectionists):

3. Add the nifty little picture above to your post (credit for which goes entirely to ideflex over at acrossthebored.com) or create your own Fi50 meme pic….
and 4. Link back here so others can jump on the mini-fic bandwagon.
At this time, I haven't been able to find a source for a free linky-list, so it's just comments. I recommend posting your basic blog link below, with the day you post your Fi50 story. You can also add a link in the comments on my story, posted the next-to-last Sunday of the month. Feel free to Tweet using the #Fi50, though I'll not lie: the Ninja Librarian is a lousy tweeter.


The May prompt is: Sweet Home, Alabama

My story: 
 

Is I-10  in Alabama long enough to tell a story?

From the back seats of the black Lexus and the green Hornet, their eyes met. While their parents drove, unaware, they fell in love.
The Hornet had Alabama plates. After the exit, she cried all the way to Texas.

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 ©Rebecca M. Douglass, 2019
 As always, please ask permission to use any photos or text. Link-backs appreciated.

Friday, October 7, 2016

Friday Flash Fiction: The Silent Girl

I picked up the prompt for this one from a random title generator several weeks ago. It took a number of false starts before I managed to get something like a story. Enjoy a little venture into the unknown, or maybe just a love story.


The Silent Girl

No one could say just when the girl came to the village. She appeared silently among the other children one day, attended the school without ever making a sound, and vanished at the end of the day. People couldn’t remember when she first came, only realizing that she was there after she had become a part of the scenery. Silence does create a sort of invisibility.
None knew who she was or where she came from. Eventually they stopped wondering and just accepted her. They gave her a name, because she would not—or could not—say what she wished to be called. So “Lily” went on, moving silently among the people, and grew to be a young woman. And still no one knew—as they suddenly realized—even so much as where she lived, where she went at night when she left the other young ones. Most shrugged and let it be. They had lives to live.
One villager, however, wasn’t satisfied. The young man Kerlin had watched Lily grow, and watched, and wondered.
Kerlin was a bit different himself. He and his father—a man almost as silent as Lily—lived in a hut well back in the forest, and the villagers left them alone. That suited Kerlin most of the time, and his father all the time. But for all that, Kerlin couldn’t let Lily alone.
Not that he pestered the girl. He just...watched.
As Lily grew older, she grew beautiful. Kerlin wasn’t the only young man to notice this, but he was the only one who cared enough for her beauty not to be put off by her silence. He began to follow her, to try to learn where she lived. He knew she was aware of him, because she became ever more elusive, vanishing into the woods at odd points, darting behind a tree or into a dense thicket without a trace.
Kerlin began to wonder at Lily’s ability to vanish. He tried again and again to track her through the forest, but she left no tracks for him to follow.
“Leave it,” advised the village elders. “Some things should not be known.”
Kerlin was a young man in love. Leaving it be was not an option. He continued to pursue Lily in his own way, as silent as she was. What would be the use of trying to talk to a girl who could not, or would not, talk? But however much he followed her, he never discovered so much as what direction she went to her home.
If she had a home.
Kerlin knew what some of the villagers said: that Lily was a witch, or even a spirit of some sort. In his heart, he feared that someday soon, when they realized she was no longer a child, there would be trouble. Someone would suffer some misfortune and blame it on the girl, because a witch was always a way to avoid admitting to bad luck or bad management.
He became desperate to discover who she was, where she came from, to find her family and prove that the girl was no witch. Or, at the worst, he could help her to go far from the village and start a new life, somewhere safe.
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So it was that on a dusky winter afternoon Kerlin followed Lily far into the forest. For once she made no effort to disappear or to lose him, nor did she ever look back to see if she followed. He supposed she knew he was there; he was no ghost to move through the forest without so much as a sound. His heart leapt at the thought that at last she was going to allow him to see her home.
They walked a long way, the girl in front, the young man always trailing just close enough to keep her in sight, never noticing that the afternoon turned to evening. Only when he found himself tripping, unable to see the ground beneath his feet, did he realize that it had grown dark, and yet he could still clearly see the girl, always in front of him, always too far off to reach.
Now he knew that Lily was, indeed, a witch or a sprite or something unhuman. And he didn’t care. He loved her, and he wanted her. He kept following.
Kerlin had long since stopped thinking and merely followed, when Lily stepped into a clearing and stopped. He hurried to catch her, and, rushing into the clearing, he found himself in a great hall, lit by a thousand candles and peopled with hundreds of men and women with the same beauty as drew him to Lily.
The crowd of beautiful people parted, and there, on a low dais, stood his father…hand in hand with the mother who had died when Kerlin was small
“Am I in the land of the dead?” he asked, bewildered.
“No, my son,” his mother said, coming toward him. “You are in the land of your own people.”
He could only look his questions. To his amazement, it was Lily who turned to him and explained.
“You are the prince of the faerie realm. But you had to live among the humans to learn what the prince must know, and you had to come back to faerie of your own accord.”
Kerlin couldn’t open his mouth or make a sound.
His father smiled, and it was the first time Kerlin had seen the man smile since his mother died—or didn’t die. “Lily was sent to lure you to us, as your mother brought me long ago.”

At that, Kerlin turned, and the young woman smiled, holding out a hand. Dazed, he took the hand, and found his tongue.
“For you, I would have gone anywhere.”
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©Rebecca M. Douglass, 2016
As always, please ask permission to use any photos or text. Link-backs appreciated!

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The Ninja Librarian’s back in town, school’s out, and all’s right with the world…or is it? Big Al may be looking forward to spending her time swimming in the creek and wandering the hills, but Peggy’s looking forward to a life of drudgery. If Al can’t find a way to sway her pa, the brightest kid in Skunk Corners is going to take drastic action.
With a mystery from the past haunting one of the houses and creating the biggest threat yet to the town, Big Al’s going to be kept busy this summer, and not just with practicing her moves for the Ninja Librarian.

Thursday, May 28, 2015

Friday Flash Fiction: The Bench

This week's challenge was to pick a photo from a random collection and write a story about it. I have been rather busy (graduations and things!) so I am turning in a half a flash--my story came in just under 500 words, and I won't try to make it any longer.

To see the photo, go here.

The Bench


No one could remember who had built the bench. Few people even knew it was there. The molded concrete sat a bit back from a little-used trail in the woods outside of town, half-overgrown with grass and bushes, greened with moss and lichen. Perhaps when it was built it wasn’t lost in the woods. Maybe there was a garden there once. No one knew, nor much cared, except to wonder in passing at such a thing in such a place.

No. One person knew. One person walked the trail from time to time, stepping carefully not to crush the flowers that sprouted along the way, and sat on the bench, gazing into the tangled woods for an hour or for half a day.

That person knew how long the bench had been there, and why it was there. He could no longer manage the walk often, because the bench he had built to sit on with the love of his life had been there a very long time, and he and it had grown old together.

She had not. The beautiful girl he had loved and had courted in the tiny hidden garden had long since passed from this earth, and from the memories of all save the old man who struggled to walk the overgrown path. He used a cane now, but with utmost care, less its unyielding tip damage the flowers, descended from the seeds she had sown. He was ancient, but she never grew old.

He sat on the bench, and ran his gnarled hands over the whorls and carvings of the seat. He had ordered the bench from Sears Roebuck, ten dollars postage-paid. No doubt at one time many, many more existed just like it. Almost like it. His fingers could still find the initials he had painstakingly carved into the pattern at the back of the seat. “Where only we will know, because you are too precious to advertise,” he had told her. Time had gnawed at the indentations, lichen done its best to fill them, but he could still trace the letters.

Once in a long while some brisk pedestrian or rambler of the woods would pass by while the old man sat. Most would look at him with curiosity, wondering why he chose to sit on the worn bench in the weeds. A few worried that he was ill, and inquired anxiously if he needed help. To those, he merely smiled and shook his head, with a brief, “I’m well enough.”

None of them saw what he saw. When he sat in the sun on his bench, he could still see her, kneeling among the flowers of the wild garden, exclaiming over each tender shoot or tiny blossom, and he was content.

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©Rebecca M. Douglass, 2015

Friday, April 3, 2015

C: Mt. Cook--Flash Fiction

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Today's post is brought to you by Mt. Cook (or Aoraki, for the Maori name), the tallest mountain in New Zealand at 12,218 feet. And, since it's Friday, it's a bit of Flash Fiction. I tried to keep it a little shorter than usual, but didn't manage by much--936 words instead of 1000.

The Grey Trail

I never wanted to go there. She was obsessed with New Zealand, and after thoroughly exploring all the areas used in the filming of The Lord of the Rings, she fixated on Mt. Cook. South Island. The end of the world, if you ask me, but she loved it and visited several times.

I didn’t go with her on any of her trips, but this time I had no choice. This time, she couldn’t go without me. I was doing it for love, for that one last thing I could do for the one I’d loved and who had driven me crazy for forty years. I was prepared to hate it, and to feel like a virtuous martyr the entire time I was fulfilling her final request.

I wasn’t prepared to be knocked over by the beauty of the place. Mind, that didn’t change the fact that I didn’t want to have to walk for miles through it, even if I could. But somehow even though I’d seen all the photos—she’d brought home millions from her trips, and I’d dutifully admired them all, even thought the scenery was very nice—I had never imagined the impact the place could have on me in person. That made it a bit awkward, in a funny way. How can you feel awkward around someone who is present only as a pile of lumpy ashes in a tin can?

Emotions don’t have to make sense. If I have learned nothing else in 65 years, 40 of them spent living with a woman with whom I shared almost no interests—how did we pull that off, anyway?—it is that emotions have their own logic. Or maybe it isn’t logic. Maybe it’s exactly the opposite of logic and reason. Anyway, we did it, and I was going to leave her ashes where she wanted them if it killed me.

Of course, the first thing that nearly killed me was the whole business of driving. Why some places think it makes sense to drive on the left side of the road, I don’t know. Nor was I quick to adapt. Maybe I could have in my younger days, but you know what they say about old dogs. It required all my attention to drive. From my first glimpse of Mt. Cook, from the south side of Lake Tekapo, where there was a gorgeous stone church overlooking the turquoise waters, I had trouble pulling my eyes from the scenery back to the road. When I began the long drive up the side of Lake Pukaki toward the mountain, I repeatedly found myself in the wrong lane. Fortunately it was early, and traffic was light. Still, I was relieved to arrive at last at the motel at the end of the road.

It was too early to check in, and too late to begin the hike that was my sole reason for being there. Instead, I wandered a short distance up a path to a viewpoint, and just sat there and looked. I tried to imagine what she had felt all those times she had come here. She had wanted to climb the peak. Had wanted—I might as well be blunt—to die on the mountain and leave her body there for the birds. That hadn’t been an option, so this was the next best thing. I would cart those ashes as far up the mountain as I could go, and commit a small act of pollution by dropping them onto a glacier.

Studying the trail map at my viewpoint, I realized that it was not going to be easy to do that. I traced the dashed blue lines and realized they wouldn’t take me onto the ice. Only the grey trails went clear to the glaciers—until I realized those grey lines were the rivers, not trails. I wondered how she would feel if the best I could do was to drop her ashes into the roiled, silty river that ran from the glacier down to the lake.

I thought about the grey trail that was the river, which flowed to a lake blue almost beyond comprehension. Yes, she would like that. She always did like transformations and mystical transmogrification. Becoming part of the glacial silt that created the distinct lake color would have felt right to her. It’s what would happen even if I did put her on the glacier.

I sat and watched the mountain and the river until my stomach reminded me that lunchtime was long past, then went and checked into my room.

That grey trail fascinated and horrified me, and I could hear the roar of the river even in my sleep. Rather, I could hear it in my room, sleeping or waking. A glacial river tumbling from mountain to valley appeared to be a noisy as well as uncontainable thing.

Was this one trail we could hike together?

In the morning, tired from my restless night, I forced myself to rise early and go to the restaurant for breakfast. I ordered a large and tasty selection of my favorites, with no concern for health. It wouldn’t be bacon that would kill me, I told myself.

Back in my room, well fed and at peace, I packed my daypack. Water, a jacket, a few granola bars, and the tin can. I began the painstaking process of putting on the braces that allowed my knees to function, as much as they would. Just to reach the swing bridge over the river would push my limits.

I had all day. I could take the grey trail back down.
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©Rebecca M. Douglass, 2015

I apologize for the quality of today's photos. I scanned them from slides shot in 1996, and our slide scanner is, shall we say, inadequate. I did my best to fix them.

The Church of the Good Shepherd and Lake Tekapo.
Mt. Cook and the top end of Lake Pukaki
Mt. Cook from somewhere near the end of the road.
The start of the Grey Trail.



Thursday, March 27, 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Under the Oak

This week's Wendig Challenge:  "You still have 1000 words.  But you’re going to break that up into 10 chapters."  No other guidance, except that the idea is "to maintain brevity but increase scope."  I hope I did that.  I know I enjoyed writing the story!


Under the Oak.  A story in 10 very short chapters.


I
The car coasted to a stop under a big oak that shadowed the pull-out.  The lights went out.  It was invisible from the road, even if there had been any traffic to see it.  At ten on a Tuesday night, no one would drive down that road.

"Is this the place?"

"Close as I can tell.  I wasn't paying as much attention as I might have, last time."

The passenger peered through the window into the darkness outside.  "I can't make it out.  I just can't tell."

"You'll see," said the driver.  "It'll come back to you."  He turned the key, and the motor died.  The sounds and scents of a summer night came in through the open windows in the sudden quiet.   The other time had been autumn.

II
It was 1959.  In some places, the country was gearing up to the Sixties.  In Boondocks, the Fifties were just getting into full swing.  The girls at Boondocks High were into roller skates, poodle skirts, and saddle shoes.  The boys wore button-down shirts and ties to school.  They smoked behind the bleachers, but only tobacco.  Other things also happened behind the bleachers.  When a girl "went to live with an aunt" far away, everyone knew what had happened, but they pretended they didn't.  They still held sock-hops in the gym on Friday nights.

III
Calvin Bergen had lived in Chicago until the start of his Senior year.  Then his father took the chance to leave his factory job, which paid well but would never go anywhere, and go run the Boondocks distributorship.  It was a huge advance, even though he took a pay cut to do it.  That didn't matter, because living in Boondocks cost next to nothing.  And he was his own boss.  That made him happy.

Calvin also liked being his own boss, and deeply resented being dragged to Boondocks.

IV
When he was settled at Boondocks High, Calvin changed his mind.  In Chicago he'd been one punk among many, chasing whatever was cool.  In Boondocks he was the master of all things Big City, which was to say, all things Cool.  When he showed up at school in a white t-shirt with a pack of cigarettes rolled up in the sleeve, the next day half the boys copied him.  Mostly they took off their shirts and ties after leaving home, in the hopes that their parents wouldn't find out.

It took two more days for the Principal to announce a rule prohibiting the wearing of t-shirts in school.

V
Calvin came to school with no shirt at all, and was suspended for three days.

VI
Dottie Calhoun was a straight-A student.  Her father owned the farm supply store, and she had more pocket-money than any other girl.  She was generous, so in spite of being rich, she was popular with the girls as well as the boys.  The teachers called on her first because she always had her work done.

Dottie was a senior, and had never seen the Principal except socially.  In twelve years she had never  been in trouble at school.  Dottie was pretty, smart, and terribly afraid of doing anything wrong.  She dated all the boys--once.  She always turned down a second date.  Midway through her Junior year she'd started to repeat, having run out of boys before she ran out of Friday nights.

VII
Dottie naturally noticed Calvin as soon as he arrived at Boondocks High.  He wasn't especially handsome, but he had the glamor of distant places and the Big City.  Even before the t-shirt episode everyone knew he was a rebel and a born leader.

In History class, when he was tilting his chair against the wall and pretending to ignore the teacher, he caught Dottie looking at him.  She flirted with her eyes and he turned away, looking bored.  She was too inexperienced to know he had done it on purpose.  Calvin had hooked the uncatchable Dottie Calhoun on the first cast.

VIII
They started dating after the no-shirt incident.  Calvin was still wearing t-shirts to school and serving detention every day in payment.  Dottie struggled with her conscience.  On the third day she went into the girls' bathroom when she got to school, and rolled her skirt waist until her knees showed.

In Detention, she sat behind Calvin and slid notes between the seats, saying "meet me at the soda fountain after we get out of here."

He sent one note back.  It read, "Forget sodas.  Meet me behind the bleachers."

Dottie had never met a boy behind the bleachers.  That was what girls did who later went to visit far-off aunts.

She went.

IX
They didn't stay behind the bleachers.  It was crowded there, even an hour after school let out.  They walked together to the parking lot and got into his car, a two-year-old Chevrolet.  Dottie could almost hear her mother's outraged gasp when she slid onto the seat, her skirt once again above her knees.  She banished all thoughts of her mother.

They drove randomly until dark, and then Calvin pulled off onto the shoulder under a tree that hid them almost completely from passing cars, if there had been any.

He turned off the motor, rolled down his window to let in the sounds and smells of an autumn night, and reached for her.

X
"I can't believe you even found a '57 Chevy," Dottie said.  "It's exactly like the one you had then."

"I know."  Calvin looked towards her.  In the dark, she was still the 17-year-old he'd taken parking 55 years ago.  "I wanted it to be just like that night."

"And modern cars are too cramped," Dottie said.  "They don't have these lovely bench seats."  She sighed happily, and he leaned in to kiss her.  Just like that night 55 years before, his hand slipped up her shirt.

They'd made the usual mistakes and lived through the results.  But this part was always good.


©Rebecca M. Douglass 2014

 

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